I am poem

I am…

Success Criteria

Use a thesaurus to choose the best vocabulary

Choose the best nouns for the poem

Choose the best adjectives to describe some nouns

Leave the reader thinking about your poem by sharing what it inside you   

I am a good werker

I wonder who I am

I hear  my saf (myself) whispering soons(sounds)

I see my souf (myself) as a good rugby player

I want to learn in my own ways

I am a good thinker

I pretend I am in the world cup

I feel so hapey when we go wild pig hunting

I touch my pupeas(puppies) boling taoll (tail)

I worry about my lerning

I cry when I am hert

I am smart

I understand what wiae to go in rugby

I say yes in my head when I get my lerning done

I dream of my salf Doing eksis (exercise)

I try my hardist at all times

I hope it is the best werk

I am a orsim werker

I have been working on a poem about me

I am proud of my I am poem because I chos(chose) the best werds(words).

Giant Soup

Camp Omatua

Camp Omatua was really fun.

Me and Ben went tubing together it was fun.
At camp, the most fun and best part was the tubing down the stream. I enjoyed it because when we went down we hit a rock  and it twered(twirled) around in sercols (circles) and I fell off the giant donut with choclite (chocolate) and sprinkles.

Me and my friends are eating the  yum apolls (apples)

                                          That is worm (warm)

 I went zooming down

Something that challenged me was to triy to get to the end on the wooter (water) slide. I ran and jumped and yes I made it.

I really enjoyed the food all of it was yum and like making the tosteas (toasties)and cooking them on the fier (fire).

Fav Book

I have been learning to share about my fav book James and the Giant Peach. It was  hared to remember what to writ I had to think and think about what happened in the story and then I had an ider (idea). I learnt that recommend mens that some one will like it  and I recommend boys will like it  beter (better).

Pig hunting

I have been learning  to prior knowledge. It was hard to put the pichis(pictures) on my presentation and it was hard to rite. I had to rit it in my oon (own) words. 

Bee Report

Turtle Calendar Art